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高考英语写作技巧——并列句
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高考英语写作技巧——并列句
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高考英语写作技巧——并列句并列句的使用可将松散的两个主谓结构联系起来,避免出现过于简单的结构,以表达较为复杂的意思,或者使句子间的联系更为紧密。但在使用并列句时,我们应根据两个并列句之间的关系确定好正确的并列连词,以便表达更加合理、顺畅。在写作过程中,我们应注意尽可能地挖掘相关信息,弄清楚所要表达的信息中相关的内容是否可以构成相应的两个前后相连的、具有某种逻辑关系的并列句。如果能够,就尽可能地避免使用简单句,而改用并列句表达。请看下面各例:Li Ming was ill. He didn’t go to school yesterday. →Li Ming was ill, so he didn’t go to school yesterday. 析:本例中,改写前的两个句子之间存在明显的因果关系。这时,我们用并列连词so将其连接在一起,整个含义在表达上就显得紧凑多了,句子间的联系也更加紧密。I do every single bit of housework. My husband Bob just does the dishes now and then. → I do every single bit of housework while my husband Bob just does the dishes now and then. 析:原来的两个简单句单独使用时,其对比或比较的语气显得较弱,但使用while这个并列连词将这两个简单句连接在一起构成并列句后,其比较或对比的语气就变得非常地强,更能起到表意的功能。Black clouds appear and stain the clear sky. At first they are over the distant forest. Soon the whole village becomes dark. A violent gale comes on. It moves at full speed under the beating, anger, and threat of the clouds.析:这里有五个简单句。如果单纯地使用简单句结构,我们都会觉得文章太单调了。但如果我们在这些句子之间,根据两句之间的逻辑关系,增加适当的并列连词,我们对文章的感觉就会大不一样。请比较增加连词后的这个片段:Black clouds appear and stain the clear sky. At first they are over the distant forest but soon the whole village becomes dark and a violent gale comes on and moves at full speed under the beating, anger, and threat of the clouds. 说明:引用此文请注明出处,并请保留该文章链接地址,谢谢~~
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