问题标题：
英语作文修改.高中五句式myfirstdayatjuniorhighschoolmyfirstdayatjuniorhighschoolistillrememberthedayicametothejuniorschool.itwasexcitingthatisawnewclassmatesteachersandnewcompus.wheniarrivedatclassroom
问题描述：
英语作文修改.高中五句式myfirstdayatjuniorhighschool
myfirstdayatjuniorhighschool
istillrememberthedayicametothejuniorschool.itwasexcitingthatisawnewclassmatesteachersandnewcompus.wheniarrivedatclassroom,ifoundlotsofstudentssitontheirseat.isaidhellowtomynewclassmatesthenwewalkedaroundintheschool.iwasproudthaticouldstudiedatthisbeautifulschool.
有什么高级词汇或句式可是替换修改的帮忙改下作文
朴永杰回答：
classroom-theclassroom要加冠词的
sit-sitting,findsbdoingsth,表示发现某人在做某事
seat-seats,座位是可数的
hellow-hello
then-andthen,除非then,前面有个句号或分号
couldstudied-couldstudy,could情态动词后用动词原形
你的英文表达很不错的.有时候不需要有太华丽的词语的,只需要将感情用简单的词表很自然地表达出来就是最好的了.有问题交流下阿
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