问题标题：
帮忙改错英语演讲稿,关于taylor的.TodayIwanttointroduceasingernamedTaylorAlison['ælɪsən]Swift.Sheisa21-year-oldgirlfromPennsylvania[pensil'veinjə,-niə],America.Sheisagood-lookinggirlwith
问题描述：
帮忙改错英语演讲稿,关于taylor的.
TodayIwanttointroduceasingernamedTaylorAlison['ælɪsən]Swift.Sheisa21-year-oldgirlfromPennsylvania[pensil'veinjə,-niə],America.Sheisagood-lookinggirlwithlongblondehairandblueeyes.Sheisasingerandsongwriter.
Taylorreallylovestosingforpeople.Shebegantosingforstrangersonthebeachwhenshewasonlyfour.Shegotherfirstguitarwhenshewas8or9years
梁玉红回答：
总体不错,就是结尾不太对头,直接掐掉了的感觉,还有就是句式有点单一.
如果是小学或者初中水平的话,试试我改的这个.希望能帮上你:).
Goodmorning,teachersandfellows.IamXXXfromclassXXX(班级).
TodayIwanttointroduceapopsinger（流行歌手）namedTaylorAlison['ælɪsən]Swift.Sheisa21-year-oldgirlfromPennsylvania[pensil'veinjə,-niə],America.Sheisgood-lookinggirl,andshehaslongblondehairandpretty（漂亮的）blueeyes.Asasuccessfulsinger,shecannotonlysingsbeautifully,butalsowriteherownsongs.
Taylorisreallytalented（有天赋的）andshelovestosingforpeople.Shebegantosingforstrangersonthebeachwhenshewasonlyfour.Shegotherfirstguitarwhenshewas8or9yearsold.Sincethen,shehasbeenworkinghardonhermusic,anduntilnow,shehasbecomefamousinmanydifferentcountriesandislovedbynumerous（无数的）teenagers（青少年）aroundtheworld.
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