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【英语作文,大意是要求归还高三体育课becausetimeisnervousingradethreeofhighschool,otherteacheroftenoccupytheP.Elesson.Wethinkthisiscorrect,becausewhenweveryhard,weneedalotsoftrainandkeepbetterstate,ifyour】
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英语作文,大意是要求归还高三体育课
becausetimeisnervousingradethreeofhighschool,otherteacheroftenoccupytheP.Elesson.Wethinkthisiscorrect,becausewhenweveryhard,weneedalotsoftrainandkeepbetterstate,ifyourbodydonnotgood,youcannotbetterstudy.Becausebodyisveryimportant,atlast,westrongdemandheadmasterreturnP.Elessons.
看一下有那些错误,指出我写文章有哪些错误即可,不必再写一篇
葛云庆回答：
WeareSeniorThreestudentsnow,andwe'realwaysinanervousandhighpressurecondition.However,wehaven'tenoughtimetorelaxandevenarelackofsleepandsports.WehaveP.ElessonbutitjustperformspracticallynofunctionbecausesomeofourteachersliketooccupyP.Elesson.Eventhoughourtimeislimitedandwealsoneedalotofeducationandkeephardworking,sportsandrelaxarestillplayinganimportantroleinstudents'life.Itissaidthatstrikeaproperbalancebetweenworkandrest.Sothatnomatterhowhardwestudentslearn,westillholdtherightofhavingthephisicaleducationinordertohelpusrelaxandbecomemorehealthier.Wearestronglyhopingthatheadmastercanunderstandandsupportus.
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