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请各位网友帮我看看这篇自我介绍怎样（英文）(自己写的,希望各位赐教)helloeverybody.nicetomlyeetyou.mynameis_______,myEnglishnameislily.I'minClass9Garde7I'mthirteenyearsold.I'malivelyandcheerfulgirl.Il
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请各位网友帮我看看这篇自我介绍怎样（英文）(自己写的,希望各位赐教)
helloeverybody.nicetomlyeetyou.mynameis_______,myEnglishnameislily.I'minClass9Garde7I'mthirteenyearsold.I'malivelyandcheerfulgirl.Ilikesummer.Because.Icanswim.Ilikedanceing.Because,itmakemehavetemperamert.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Myfather,mymotherandme.Mymotherisawork.ShelikeswatchingTV.Shegoestoworkbybus.Myfatherisaengineer.Helikesreadingnewspaper.Hegoestoworkbybike.I'mastudent.Igotoschoolonfoot.Althoughsomecoldtoday,butI'mveryhappy.Listentome,thankyou.
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以下是我的修改,大部分是语法.因为感觉楼应该是初中生就不该句型了.
helloeverybody.nicetomeetyou.mynameis_______,myEnglishnameislily.I'minClass9Garde7.I'mthirteenyearsold.I'malivelyandcheerfulgirl.Ilikesummer.Becauseitisagoodseasontoswim.Ilikedanceing.Because,itmakesmehaveanartistictemperament(楼是想说有气质吗?).Therearethreemembership（对家人用people感觉有点冷漠）inmyfamily.Myfather,mymotherandme.Mymotherisaworker.ShelikeswatchingTV.Shegoestoworkbybus.Myfatherisanengineer.Helikesreadingnewspaper.Hegoestoworkbybike.I'mastudent.Igotoschoolonfoot.Althoughitis(句子要有主谓)alittlecoldtoday,（although从句后面不能用but）I'mveryhappy.thankyou(foryourlistening其实这个也比较不正式,可以直接说谢谢结尾.).
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