一篇英语高中演讲文章,WhatcanIlearnfromearthquake?

演讲要求是希望路过的或者直达的都帮我看看有没有问题或者哪里需要改进,在下感激不尽!文章如下:

Learnfromearthquake

Earthquakehasdestroyedalotofhouses,factories,schoolsandhospitals.largenumbersofpeoplewerealongandhomeless.allthecountrywasinanatmosphereofsorrowinalongtime.

Butthat’snotall,becausewearestillhere,wemustlearnsomethingfromthedisaster.

Theremustbealotofpeoplehadtakentheirdreamsintograves,theywantedtodosomethingafterMay12th,buttheyfollowedthestepofthegodduringtheearthquake.ifyoudon’twanttomisssomethingyoureallywouldliketo,justtakeactionatonce,don’tsaytomorroworeventhedayaftertomorrow.

Occasionally,ourlifecouldnotalwaysbeeasy,wemaymeetalotoftroublesindailylife.weshouldfightforaliferatherthanlivealife.justasasurvivorwhorecoversfromearthquakesays,ItoldmyselfIcangothroughthetroublewhenIwasintheruinsohavingbeeninthe30hours,thesaviorsavedme.

Tostrongyourselfisalsoimportant.wemaywanttohelpothers,butwefindourselveshavenothingtohelpthem.haveyoudonatedsomemoneytoWenchuancounty,haveyousentsomebookstoQingchuancounty,haveyougavesomewaterandfoodtoBeichuancounty?Ifyouranswersareno,youshouldrealizethatyouarenotstrongenough,sostrongyourselffirstly.

Weshouldbeobjectivetolifeandalwaysremindyouthethreepointsasfollows,takeactionatonce,nevergiveupeasilyandstrongyourself.

822193819这位朋友翻译了很多，但我觉得你翻译很别扭呢？

yunmenglian朋友的回答让我有点吃惊，我认为你提出来的那几句话中没有出现了多谓语呢，一大句中不是可以有三分句么？分句自然有其自己的谓语。

也许我这样说有点过分，但对于真理而言，我们应该谨慎才是。自己的确难易发现错误，希望大家认真帮我诊断........错了不要紧，但是我们需要明白错在哪里。