问题标题：
请大家帮忙修改一篇英语作文.OnSunday,Iusuallygetupat7:00.ThenIwashmyfaceandbrushmyteeth.AfterIhavebreakfast,Igoshoppingwithmymother.Wegotothesupermarketbybus.Webysomevegetablesandtakeabusreturnourhome.W
问题描述：
请大家帮忙修改一篇英语作文.
OnSunday,Iusuallygetupat7:00.ThenIwashmyfaceandbrushmyteeth.AfterIhavebreakfast,
Igoshoppingwithmymother.Wegotothesupermarketbybus.Webysomevegetablesandtakeabusreturnourhome.Wehavenoodleforourdinner.Afterdinner,Isleepforalittlewhile.ThenIdomyhomeworkfrom14:00to17:00.Aftersuper,IwatchTVorreadsomebooks.Igotobedat21:00.It’smySunday.
请大家指出里面的语法错误。
高智杰回答：
1、这是叙述过去的事件,而且有准确的时间,因此全文的基本时态确定为一般过去时.用一般现在时不合适.
2、return是动词,前面已经有了takeabus所以这里连续用动词是错误的,改为backhome,这里没必要加our.
3、noodle一般用复数形式,改为noodles.
4、午餐是lunch,dinner改为lunch,和早餐晚餐保持一致.
改后全文：
OnSunday,Iusuallygotupat7:00.ThenI
washedmyfaceandbrushedmyteeth.AfterIhadbreakfast,Iwentshopping
withmymother.Wewenttothesupermarketbybus.Weboughtsomevegetables
andtookabusbackhome.Wehadnoodlesforlunch.Afterlunch,Islept
foralittlewhile.ThenIdidmyhomeworkfrom14:00to17:00.Aftersupper,I
watchedTVorreadsomebooks.Iwenttobedat21:00.It’smySunday.
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