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tablebelowgivesinformationonconsumerspendingondifferentitemsinfivedifferentcountriesin2002.
Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.
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Thetablegivesabreakdownofhowmuchconsumersspentondifferentitemsamongfivecountriesin2002.
Wecanseethatfood,drinksandtobaccowerethemainexpenditures.Inparticular,Turkeytookup32.14%oftheexpenditures.,whichwasthelargestamongthefivecountries.RankingnextwasIreland,with28.91%ofthetotalexpenditures.Andthespendinginotherthreecountrieswereallbelow20%.
Asforclothing&footwear.Italianpeoplemayprefertospendmoreondressing(9%).ThiswasfollowedbyIreland,SpainandTurkey(allataround6%).TheconsumptionofdressinginSwedenaccountedforthesmallestproportion(5.4%).
Additionally,consumersamongthese5countriesspentrarelyonleisureandeducation.Only4.35%people’sannualpaymentinTurkeywasintobothfields.Andtheremainingthreecountrieswerewholyunder4%.
Conclusioncanbeclearlyreachedthatamongthese5countries,Irishpeopletendtospendmoreonfood,drinkandtobacco,whichtendtobethemostpopularcategoryofconsumerexpenditureinthe5countriesin2002.