字典翻译 问答 小学 作文 6级作文求修改与可能分数Whenenglishplayacrucialroleallovertheworld,anincreasingnumberofstudentslearnenglishharderandharderinsteadoflearningourmothertongue,Chinese.Inrecentyears,somestudentsevencannotspeakorwr
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6级作文求修改与可能分数Whenenglishplayacrucialroleallovertheworld,anincreasingnumberofstudentslearnenglishharderandharderinsteadoflearningourmothertongue,Chinese.Inrecentyears,somestudentsevencannotspeakorwr
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6级作文求修改与可能分数

Whenenglishplayacrucialroleallovertheworld,anincreasingnumberofstudentslearnenglishharderandharderinsteadoflearningourmothertongue,Chinese.Inrecentyears,somestudentsevencannotspeakorwriteacompleteparagraph.TheyignoretheimportanceoflearningChineseandit'sdangerousfortheonewhodoesn'tmakeitinmind.It'snotexaggeratingthatwewillloseourselvesifweignoreChineselearninginthelongrun.Thereareseveralreasonstosupportmyview.Initially,languageisthebasisoftheculture.Loseourlanguagewewillloseanything.Moreover,weareChinese,andwespeakChinese.IfweourselvesdonotspeakChineseorcannotspeakChinesewell,whatcouldwespeak?WecommunicateinChinese.HowcouldwecommunicatewithotherswithoutChinese?

Inaccordancewiththisphenomenon,IreckonweshouldlearnnotonlyenglishbutalsoChinese.OnlyifwelearnChinese,canwestandinaworldasaChinese.

解飞回答:
  我不知道你的作文题目是什么,我发现了几个错误,第一个是第一句话,whenenglishplayacrucialrole,这里应该用plays.还有下面,loseourlanguage,wewillloseanything.我想这里应该用everything好点吧.整体来说,作文还是不错的,如果作文主题也相符的话,分数应该不低.
解万成回答:
  题目是DueAttitudeShouldBeGiventotheStudyofChinese
解飞回答:
  那你有点偏了,人家要你写的是对汉语学习应有的态度,你给人家分析了为什么要学汉语
解万成回答:
  我写经常都偏,所以分数都上不去,纠结啊,那大概有多少?合格会不会有?
解飞回答:
  不太清楚,这得看判卷的老师了。
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