问题标题:
帮我检查一下有没有大的语法错误~(英语)listenling!asongissinging.itsaysiloveumydarling.butiamknowing,icanonlysayitwhenyouaresleeping...myheartiscrying.so,nexttimeiwilltrying,tryforgettingbecauseicann
问题描述:
帮我检查一下有没有大的语法错误~(英语)
listenling!
asongissinging.
itsaysiloveumydarling.
butiamknowing,
icanonlysayitwhenyouaresleeping...
myheartiscrying.
so,nexttimeiwilltrying,
tryforgetting
becauseicannothelploving
stop~stoprunning~
那歌声
它在传达我爱你,
但我知道
我只能在你睡着的时候告诉你
我的心在哭泣
所以在下一次我会做出抉择
努力忘记
因为我情不自禁的爱你...
最后一句翻不好,就是想写running
写的是诗,是不是不用太讲究语法?
一楼的那位,我查了一下字典,trying好像有抉择的意思,还有try应该有trydoing和trytodo两种用法吧,小弟才疏学浅,忘大哥予以解答
曲秀全回答:
我帮你改了一下,是不是更上一层楼?
Oh,mydarling
areulistening
asongissinging
ittellsumyloving
itisfeelingofwondering,
ificanonlysayitwhilesleeping
who'severheardmyheartcrying
nexttimeiwillbetrying
tryforgetting
becauseicannothelploving
oh,mydarling
pleasestopescapingandrunning
allyouknowismyfeeling
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