哥哥,五分有点少了,加点嘛! 　　IfIhavealotofmoney,then. 　　Iwouldusethemoneyinthefollowingareas 　　FirstIwouldbuybooksIwanttosee,Ithinkthatknowledgeispower,Ineedtorecharge 　　ThesecondpointIwouldbuyabighouse,Shanghai'shousingpricesareexpensive,Iliveintheenvironmentofasmallplaceisnotgood. 　　Third,IpreparedforhertogivepensionsfortheelderlywhentheycanliveacomfortableIfIhavealotofmoney,IwillsharewithmyfamilyandChildrenshouldnothavetoomuchmoney,parentsshouldstrictlyadheretogoodusetheirmoneytomakemoneyandcultivatetheirindependenceandagoodhabitofthriftandeconomy.Toldthemthemoneyshouldbewellspent. 　　可以缩短一些不必要的段落.