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diagreeoragree：itisimpossibletobecompletelyhonestwithyourfriend
Friendsplayanessentialroleinourlives,nomatterwhatdifficultiesandhappinesswemeet,theycansharethesorrowandpleasurewithus.However,Ibelievewecannotbetotallyhonestwithourfriendnomatterhowcloseweare.
First,itisimportanttokeepaprivatespaceforourselves.Everyonehastheirsecretsthatisreluctanttobeknownbyothers,forinstance,somephysicallyshortcoming,somemiserablememories,someprestigetoothers,etc.Itcannotbeequaltothedistrust,someofthesemayrefertoothers'interestsortheyjustdonnotwanttomentionitagain.Eventhoughtheclosestfriend,theyunderstandtheirfriendwellinsomecircumstances.Moreover,Ithinktobetotallyhonestisimpossiblebecausepeopletendtoprotectthemselvesautomatically.
Second,sometimeshonestycanhurtothersjustasasharpknifepenetratedpeople'sheart.Supposinganinstitutionthatyourfriendhasgotabadgradeonatest,thoughyouawarethatsheisreallynotgoodatstudyingandcannotfollowwhattheteachersaid,youhadbetternottellherthelowscorederivesfromherfoolish.Maybeitisbettertoconvinceheritisherignoringaboutstudyingthatcausethisproblem.Donnotbesincereoccasionallyisaneffectivewaytocomfortyourfriends.
Finally,wehaveourresponsibilitiestoprotectsomevitalsecrets,likeourcompany'sessentialdata.Tobeanemployee,wehavethedutytobeloyaltoourcompanyevenintheexpenseoftellingalietoourfriends.Ifourfriendsaresincerefriends,theywillunderstandourchoice.
Inbrief,don'tbehonestallthetimecanneverdestroyourfriendship,onthecontrary,itcangiveussomepersonalspaceandhaveabetterwaytoknowaboutothers.Besides,therearesomeprinciplestobeobeyedinthefriendship,thatiswecannevermerelyconsiderourfeelingbutignoretheterribleinfluenceitwillmake.