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帮我评论一下这篇英语作文吧（四级的）MyViewsonOnlineShoppingMoreandmorepeopleshoponlinewiththedevelopmentoftheInternet.Somepeoplesupportthisphenomenonofsocialsituation,becauseonlineshoppingcanstimulatecons
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帮我评论一下这篇英语作文吧（四级的）
MyViewsonOnlineShopping
MoreandmorepeopleshoponlinewiththedevelopmentoftheInternet.Somepeoplesupportthisphenomenonofsocialsituation,becauseonlineshoppingcanstimulateconsumptionandthegovernmentalsosupportthisaction.Butsomepeopleworryaboutonlineshoppingthatbringssomeproblem,forexamplethesecurityofaccounts’code,people’scredit,andsoon.
AsfarasIamconcerned,peopleshoponlineverifythefootstepswhichtimeprogresses,sowecan’tstopthatactionjustbecauseofthoselittleproblems.However,thoseproblemsmustbesolved,oritwillweakentheconsumers’confidence.Personally,Ithinkgovernmentmustperfecttoday’slegalsystemsaboutonlineshopping.Andtheconsumersmustalsoimproveyouralertinyourbusiness.
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WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,moreandmorepeopleprefertoshoponlinethesedays.(提出现象)Somepeopleareinfavorofonlineshoppingforitsconvenience.Whileothersareconcernedaboutt...
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