Obeythetrafficrules 　　Everyyearmanypeoplegethurtorlosetheirlivesintrafficaccident.Howcanweobeythetrafficrules?First,inmostofChina,wekeepontherightoftheroad.Second,beforewecrosstheroad,wemuststopandlookbothways—lookleft,lookrightandlookleftagain.Third,wemustdon’tplayonthestreet. 　　Last,it’sgoodtohelpchildrenandoldpeoplecrosstheroad.1.Obeythetrafficrules,文章标题不用动词短语,换成名词形式ObeyingtheTrafficLaws 　　2.intrafficaccident,事故很多,用复数形式比较好trafficaccidents 　　3.Howcanweobeythetrafficrules?译为“我们们如何能够遵守交通规则”,上下句联系欠佳,可以换成以下几种形式： 　　howcanwecutdown(decrease/avoid/prevent)this?Ithinkweshouldobeythetrafficrules.或者Thatiswhyweshouldobeythetrafficrules.（这就是我们为什么要遵守交通规则的原因)thatiswhy.“这就是.的原因"或：Whatshouldwedotoavoidthis?ithinkweshoudobeythesetrafficrules. 　　4.wekeepontherightoftheroad.换成weshouldkeeprightwhenwalkingalongtheroad.keepright靠右 　　5.wemuststopandlookbothways.表示看的方向时最好用direction,换成wemuststopandlookbothdirections6.Third,wemustdon’tplayonthestreet.语法错误,换成：Third,wemustn’tplayonthestreet.表示禁止做… 　　7.Last,it’sgoodtohelpchildrenandoldpeoplecrosstheroad. 　　英语时间顺序的表达应该是：first,second,then,atlast/finally；last换成atlast或者finallyit’sgoodtodosth.和helpsb(to)dosth：to可以省略,这两个句型结构用的好,表达清楚,简洁.参考例句(文) 　　1.howcanwecutdown(decrease/avoid/prevent)this? 　　2.Thatiswhyweshouldobeythetrafficrules.（这就是我们为什么要遵守交通规则的原因) 　　3.Whatshouldwedotoavoidthis?ithinkweshoudobeythesetrafficrules. 　　4.weshouldkeeprightwhenwalkingalongtheroad.5.wemustn’tplayonthestreet.