【请各位英文大侠帮我点评一下!请不要吝啬你们的建议!ApplicationformMynameisJaneHu,IamfromHunanprovince,andIam21yearsold.iamanoutgoingandactivityperson.I’mgoodatgettingalongwiththeotherpeople.andIcan】|小学英语问答-字典翻译问答网

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【请各位英文大侠帮我点评一下!请不要吝啬你们的建议!ApplicationformMynameisJaneHu,IamfromHunanprovince,andIam21yearsold.iamanoutgoingandactivityperson.I’mgoodatgettingalongwiththeotherpeople.andIcan】

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请各位英文大侠帮我点评一下!请不要吝啬你们的建议!

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MynameisJaneHu,IamfromHunanprovince,andIam21yearsold.iamanoutgoingandactivityperson.I’mgoodatgettingalongwiththeotherpeople.andIcanadoptthenewenvirremetnandlearnnewthingsquickly.

Ihave1yearworkexperienceinCanadianinternationalorganizationforteachingasistant.EverydayIhavetodiscusswiththeforeighteacherwhatwelearntoday,andhowtoteachit.Intheeverningthestudentsneedreviewthelessonsthroughthephone.AndthenIshouldtalkwiththeirparentaboutthemwhatthelearnandhowtheyfeel.SometingsIneedtodecoratingtheclassroom.InthisyearIlearnedalotfromwork.IshouldhaveconfideceinmyselfevenIdidn’thavethisexpirenceaboutsomething.don’tstickatsmalldifficultthings.butkeepdoing.

Iamreadyforeverythingtohaveachalengeformynewjob.becauseIhaveconfidencetomyself.Pleasegivemethechance.Thanksalot.

Jane

哪们英语高手帮我点评，小女在此将感激不尽！

刘春红回答：

　　额.拼写错误environment,sometimes,challenge之类的,这些自己仔细检查一下就可以发现的. 　　还有一些小的语法错误,比如说EverydayIhavetodiscusswiththeforeighteacherwhatwelearntoday,andhowtoteachit,“teacher”最好是复数,然后teach后面的“it”可以省略的. 　　I’mgoodatgettingalongwiththeotherpeople."the"是要省略的. 　　andIcanadopt,应该是adapt,adapt是适应的意思,adopt是领养的意思这句我觉着可以说andIcanadapttothenewenvironmentsoonandacceptnewthingsquickly. 　　needtodosth.而不是needdoingsth. 　　AndthenIshouldtalkwiththeirparentaboutthemwhatthelearnandhowtheyfeel.这一句,应该是parents,后面的应该是你手误了吧,"aboutwhattheylearnandhowtheyfeel" 　　haveconfidenceinsb.而不是on或者可以用beconfidentin,就是最好不要过多的用相同的词组或者是单词. 　　最后还有一点,在比较正式的英文书写中,最好不要出现省略形式,比如说I'm'最好是写Iam之类的,这是我们外教说的.祝申请顺利!

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