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Somepeopleclaimthatparentsshouldnotletchildrenmakemistakesand
thenlearnfromthem.Thisargumentseemsreasonable.Forexample,mycousinis
studyingintheTsinghuaUniversityandthewaymyauntusedtoeducatehimwas
takecareofeverythingforhimexceptedforlearning,sohenearlymadeany
mistakesthatmadehimareallyconfidentstudentwhichwasoneofthemainly
reasonhecouldentertheTsinghuaUniversity.
First,
childrencanlivewithlesspressureiftheirparentsdonotletthemmake
mistakesandthenlearnsomethingfromthem.Thisisbecauseparentswhotryto
helptheirchildrenavoidingmistakesandtroublescanprovidemorepeacefuland
happierenvironmentfortheirkidstogrowupandhaveanenjoyableandless
pressurechildhood.
Second,
parentswhodonotletchildrenmakemistakescanimprovetheirchildren’s
studyingefficiency.AsImentioninthefirstparagraph,myaunttakecareof
allthestuffsformycousin,suchasclothing,transportation,tuitionfee,
etc.Thereforemycousinwillnotworryaboutthosethingsandisabletoonly
focusonstudying.
However,
although,parentswhodonotlettheirchildrenmakemistakesandlearnfromtheir
mistakescanprotecttheirchildrenfrompressure,thiskindofbehavecanalso
maketheirchildrenbecomevulnerable.Therefore,whentheygrowup,andhave
tofacethetroublesbythemselvestheymaydonotknowwhattodoandget
overwhelming,oncetheymakemistakesmaybeevenasmallmistakecanletthem
lossconfidenceandthengiveup.
Furthermore,
thiskindofopinionmighthelpthechildrentoincreasetheirstudying
efficiencybutitisonlyforthetextbookknowledge,theymissdozenof
chancestopracticetheirsocialskill,communicationskill,andorganization
skill,parentswhotakecareofallthebusinessesfortheirkidswillforce
thembecomewhatpeoplecall“pedant”,soitisfairtosaythisopinionhurts
theirchildrenandmakethemlearnnothing.