高手帮我修改下这份简历（语法.词汇.格式方面的错误）
Resume
PersonalInformation
Name:****
Gender:MALE
DateofBirth:1986/10/24
Residency:Shanghai
WorkExperience:Student
Hukou:SHANGHAI
Address:****
ZipCode:
SelfAssessment
Out-going,enthusiasticaboutlearning,responsibleandcreative,findssatisfactionandpleasureinteamwork,abletocommunicatewithsupervisorsandstaff.
CareerObjective
TypeofEmployment:Intern/Trainee
DesiredLocation:Shanghai
DesiredSalary:Negotiable/Month
DesiredPosition:Intern
WorkExperience
2007/07--2007/09：ShanghaiHighqualityFamilyeducationCompany
Industry:Education/Training
FamilyeducationTutor
Summerarrangesthefamilybythecompanytocarryonthefamilyeducation
2006/07--2006/09：Commonpeopleworkplace（Shanghai）CulturaldevelopmentLimitedcompany
Industry:Furniture/HomeAppliances/Arts&Craft/Toys
SalesRegionalSalesManager
Ascompanycommercialrepresentative,theindependenceorganizesthepersonneltocompletethecompanyinSongjiangDistrictareapresentsaleduty.sendedtheplacardthroughon-lineforum,sentwaysandsooncirculartoseekfor3schoolmatestoselltogether.Summervacation2monthsthroughvisittosellobtaincertainachievement.
Education
2005/09--PresentDongHuaUniversityMacromoleculeMaterialsEngineeringBachelor
MaterialScienceandEngineeringspecialtyincludingpolymerchemistry,Highpolymerphysics,Thechemicalprincipleandsoonaseriesandchemistrychemicalindustryrelatedcurriculum.
Extra-curriculars
2006/08--2007/09Director-GeneraloftheMinistryofstudentlifeLeadershipPosition
Ministerofpersonneltocompletethetask,whilehewasorganizingschoolstudentstoparticipateinthefruitsheightmatchcompetitionbedroomoutstandingselection,andotheractivities,betterimpact.
LanguageSkills
EnglishGOOD
（我对自己的英文水平不是很信任,所以再此请求高手的指导,简历中有什么语法错误