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点评一篇英语作文.一篇初三的作文,内容基本已经写完整了,希望找出哪里有语法错误,和需要修改的地方DearLiHua,IamhappytohearthatyouaregoingtostudyinCanada.AndIhavesomeadviceforyou.It'salwaysa
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点评一篇英语作文.一篇初三的作文,内容基本已经写完整了,希望找出哪里有语法错误,和需要修改的地方
DearLiHua,
IamhappytohearthatyouaregoingtostudyinCanada.AndIhavesomeadviceforyou.It'salwaysabitcoldinNovemberinCanada.Soyouhadbettertakesomewarmclothes,oryouwillhaveacoldeasily.YouwilllivewithaCanadianfamily.Soremembersomehabitslikethese.First,youhavetoknockatthedoorbeforeyouentersomeone'sroom.Second,whenyouneedtousethephone,youshouldaskifyoucandothat.Third,bepolitetootherandtalkwiththemifpossible.Ifyouhavesomeimportantthings,youmustalwayscarrythemwithyouorkeeptheminthebank.It'smuchsafer.Justtakeiteasy,youwillhaveagreattime.
作文要求是这样的:我的朋友李华将要去加拿大做交流生,希望询问我一些注意事项.
上面是我写的作文,内容不要改变,希望找出不通顺的帮我修改修改,还有语法错误等.把修改的写出来.
刘丹莹回答：
我帮你重写了一些.我觉得原来不太通顺.你可参考,不然有些话真的太白了,而且没有礼貌.
DearLiHua,
IamreallyhappytoknowthatyouaregoingtostudyinCanada.Ihavesomeadviceforyou,myfriend.
Canadahasacoldandharshwintersoyou'dbettertakewithyousomequalitywarmclothes,andtakegoodcareofyounottocatchacold.
Further,ifyouarelivinginahome-staywithaCanadianfamily,youshouldbearinmindsomeoftheircustoms.First,alwaysknockatthedoorbeforeyouentersomeone'sroom.Second,askbeforeyouusethephone.(拜托不要凑字,该简洁就要简洁).Third,respectothersandbepolitewhenyoutalktopeople.
Bytheway,ifyouhavesomethingimportant,youcanstoretheminavaultofabankorinalocker.
AllthebestandhavefunintheMapleCountry!
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