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想请会的人帮忙批改一下四级作文,谢谢这是自己写的一篇四级作文想请有能力的人帮忙批改一下,谢谢VolinteersNeededBoysandgirlspleasepayyourattentiontothisimformation.Our
问题描述：
想请会的人帮忙批改一下四级作文,谢谢
这是自己写的一篇四级作文想请有能力的人帮忙批改一下,谢谢
VolinteersNeeded
Boysandgirlspleasepayyourattentiontothisimformation.Ourschool'sstudentunionisgoingtoorganizeaactivityandyouwillasavolunteerjoinus.wearelookingforvolunteerandwehopeyoucantakepartinthisactivitywhenwetakevocation.
Wearrangethisactivitynotonlyletwetodosomemeaningfulthingsbutalsoitwillexerciseourcompentency.Ifyoutakepartinthisactivityyoucanharvestalotofexperiences.Itmeaningfulforustodoworkinthefuture.Wewilltohelplonelyoldpeopleandwashawaythosebadadversaryonthewallandsoon.
Ifyouwanttojoinuspleasecallme:135168.Wearelookingforwardtoyoucanjoinus,wewelcomeeverybody.
付光远回答：
第一段第二句我觉得可以写成Thestudentunionofourschoolwillorganizeanactivityinrecentdaysandyoucanjoinusasvolunteers.第二段第一句Thisactivitywillnotonlyletyoudosomethingmean...
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