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【求改六级作文ShouldParentsSentTheirKidstoArtClasses1.x05有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班.2.x05有人并不赞成……3.x05我认为……Whenyouwalkonaroad,whenyouwatchTV,whenyousurfontheinternet,therehasa】
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求改六级作文
ShouldParentsSentTheirKidstoArtClasses
1.x05有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班.
2.x05有人并不赞成……
3.x05我认为……
Whenyouwalkonaroad,whenyouwatchTV,whenyousurfontheinternet,therehasalotsofadvertisementsaboutartclasses.Suchaspiano,painting,singingandsoon.Inthiscircumstance,parentssenttheirkidstoattendtheartclasses.Becausetheywishtheirkidshaswiningatthebeginning.
Whilesomepeopledonotthinkthisactionisgood.Forthereasonisthat,thekidsidtooyoung,theyneedtimetoplaygameswiththeirfriends.Themostimportantisthat,afterschool,kidsisalreadytired,theyneedhavearest.
Inmyopining,parentsshouldsenttheirkidstoartclasses,butdonottoomuch.Becausenotonlydidthekidscanlearnknowledge,butalsocandon’tletthemtootired.
骆晨钟回答：
Whenyouwalkonaroad,watchTVorsurfontheinternet,therearelotsofadvertisementsaboutartclasses,Suchaspianoclasses,paintingstudy,singingandsoon,catchyoureyes.Underthiscircumsta...
阮炳涛回答：
takingtheircondintionsintoaccount是什么意思啊？alotof和lotsof有什么区别？
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