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【（急）高手帮忙改英文作文!怎样可以post更多字上来啊？？？要改的：请帮改文法，把词语变得更好.....Firstly,thegovernmentshouldimprovethewelfareofthegrassrootstoalleviatethegapbetweentherichandth】
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（急）高手帮忙改英文作文!
怎样可以post更多字上来啊？？？
要改的：请帮改文法，把词语变得更好.....
Firstly,thegovernmentshouldimprovethewelfareofthegrassrootstoalleviatethegapbetweentherichandthepoor.Thecurrentwelfarepoliciesmadebythegovernment,suchasthereductionofpublichousingrents,electricitybillsandthereleaseofadditionalCSSApayments,althoughthesolutionofthepoormeettheurgentneedsoflittlehelp,butthelong-termbutthenoutofpoverty.Therefore,thegovernmentshouldchangeitslandpolicytobuildmorepublichousingandpublichousing,andprovidethepublicwithbasichousingneeds.Inaddition,thegovernmentshouldimplementauniversalretirementprotection,long-termpreparationforthepublic,andadjustedupwardstheamountoftheminimumwagewillhelptoenhancetheincomeofthelowerclass.
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1.内个~中心思想是公民福利问题么?.2.而且就开头用了一个,你后面没承接啊3.Althougbut不能连用啊Thegovernmentisexpectedtofocusmoreonthewell-beingoflowerclassofthesocietyastonarrowtheg...
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