字典翻译 问答 小学 作文 高一作文打分第一篇Wemiddleschoolstudenthavehadmanytestsorexams,ASaresult,themajorityofusmightsucceedorfailinthemHowever,theattitudestowardsfailurearevaryingfrompersontoperson.Withsortingthemout,Iputthemint
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高一作文打分第一篇Wemiddleschoolstudenthavehadmanytestsorexams,ASaresult,themajorityofusmightsucceedorfailinthemHowever,theattitudestowardsfailurearevaryingfrompersontoperson.Withsortingthemout,Iputthemint
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第一篇

Wemiddleschoolstudenthavehadmanytestsorexams,ASaresult,themajorityofusmightsucceedorfailinthemHowever,theattitudestowardsfailurearevaryingfrompersontoperson.Withsortingthemout,Iputthemintotwodifferentclassifications.thepeoplewhofacethefailurewithpositivemoodwillencouragethemselves,andgainconfidenceonceagainsothattheycouldcorrecttheirmistakesinnotimewhichhavebeenmade.Onthecontrary,withnegativeattitude,theywillabandonthemselvesandlosetheirconfidence.Atlast,Theywillneversparenoeffortstostruggle,Inmyopinion,weshouldmaintainthefirstkind,onlyinthiswaycanwesucceedatlast!

第二篇

Wemiddleschoolstudentshavehadmanytestsandexams.Wehavebothachievedsuccessandsufferedfromfailure.Differentstudentsholddifferentattitudestofailure.

Somefallinlowspiritswhentheydon'tdowellintheexams.Theyloseheartandnolongerstudyhardasbefore.

Butmoststudentstakeanactiveattitudetowardsfailure.TheyfindoutthecausessothattheywillnotmakethesimilarmistakesIagreewiththosewithactiveattitudes.

Asweknow,Failureisthemotherofthesuccess.evengreatmenhavefailmanytimesbeforethesucceedSowemustdealwithourmistakescorrectly.

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李淼回答:
  我是大学英语写作老师,我认为:A=20-23B=23-26.   理由如下:B-段落清晰,论证清楚,随有语法和文法错误,但不影响阅读.
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