问题标题：
1.WereceivedanofferofRM320000forthehouse,thatweaccepted.2.sinceherbloodpressureismushhigherthanitshouldbe,herdoctorinsiststhatshewillnotsmokeanylonger.3.Hehastosisters,neitherofwhowenttouniversity.4.Thebeachist
问题描述：
1.WereceivedanofferofRM320000forthehouse,thatweaccepted.
2.sinceherbloodpressureismushhigherthanitshouldbe,herdoctorinsiststhatshewillnotsmokeanylonger.
3.Hehastosisters,neitherofwhowenttouniversity.
4.ThebeachistheplacewhichImostliketogoinsumer.
5.Hetalkedcheerfullyaboutthefilmandtheactresswhointerestedhim.
6.Therewaslittlewhichcouldbedoneforinjuredman.
7.Thereasonwhichherejectedourpianisthathehadnofaithinit.
8.Thatistheplayeronthatweallrely.
9.Heneverhesitatestomakesuchcriticismsareconsideredhelpfultoothers.
10.Theytiredtothinkofaplanbythattheycouldfulfilltheirtaskaheadoftime.
宋云麟回答：
1逗号去掉
2will改成must
3to改成two...(不知道是不是你打错了哈),然后who改them
4我觉得这个句子改N个词还是不对头.
5加in在interested后
6改man为men
7该which为why
8把ON丢到句尾
9加THAT到criticisms后
10that改which
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