看一下这个,哪里有错的都指出来,水平很低的啊!Iliketravel.BecauseitcanmakemehappyandIcanlearnmanythingsfromeveryplacesintheworld.IwenttravelwithmymumwhenIwassix.Fromthenon,IwillgotoaplacethatIhave|小学英语问答-字典翻译问答网

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看一下这个,哪里有错的都指出来,水平很低的啊!Iliketravel.BecauseitcanmakemehappyandIcanlearnmanythingsfromeveryplacesintheworld.IwenttravelwithmymumwhenIwassix.Fromthenon,IwillgotoaplacethatIhave

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看一下这个,哪里有错的都指出来,水平很低的啊!

Iliketravel.BecauseitcanmakemehappyandIcanlearnmanythingsfrom

everyplacesintheworld.IwenttravelwithmymumwhenIwassix.Fromthenon,

IwillgotoaplacethatIhaven’tbeenoneachsummerholiday.SoIhadbeento

manyplacesintheworld.LikeAmerica,Thailand,Malaysia,Singapore…That’sthe

overseas.InChina,IhadbeentoGuilin,Beijing,HongKong,Macao,Sitsang,

Guizhou…Oh,somany!IgiveaprofundityimpressionofAmericaandSitsang.I

wenttoAmericawithmyclassmateandteacherfor13days.Butwithnoparents.

That’sveryinterestingIthink.SoImusttakecareofmyself.Wehadbeento

SanFrancisco,LosAngel,NewYorkandWashingtonD.C..ButL.A.isthemost

interesting.BecauseThereisaDisneyandHollywood.Andit’smuchbiggerthan

theoneinHongKong!AlsoSitsangmakemesurprise.That’sthemostbeautiful

placethatIhadseen.IfIhaveachanceIwillshowthephotoofSitsang’stoyou!

Ienjoytravelling.That’swhythetitleofthisarticleis“Travelinmylife”!

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　　IlikedtravellingbecauseitcouldmakemehappyandIcouldlearnlotsofthingsfrom 　　manyplacesintheworld.IwenttotravelwithmymumwhenIwassix.Fromthenon, 　　IwouldgotoaplacethatIhaven’tbeenoneachsummerholiday.Furthermore,Ihadbeento 　　manyplacesintheworldlikeAmerica,Thailand,Malaysia,andsoon.InChina,IhadbeentoBeijing,HongKong,Sitsang,ect.Oh,somany!IgaveaprofundityimpressionofAmericaandSitsang.IwenttoAmericawithmyclassfor13days.ThatwasveryinterestingIthought.WehadbeentoSanFrancisco,LosAngel,NewYorkandWashingtonD.C..IthoughtL.A.wasthemost 　　interestingplacebecausetherehasDisneyandHollywoodandit’smuchbiggerthan 　　theoneinHongKong!Also,Sitsangmademesurprise:itwasthemostbeautifulplacethatIhadseen.IfIhadachance,IwouldshowthephotosofSitsangtoyou! 　　Ienjoyedtravelling.That’swhythetitleofthisarticleis“Travelinmylife”! 　　时态完全不一样没有办法改只能这个样子了

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