英语作文,因为以前没好好学语法,所以很纠结,希望来个好心人帮我纠正下错误,谢谢.

题目是书本是否应该被电脑取代?

ThereisnodoubtthatInternetisaveryimportantpartofourdailylife.Somepeoplethinkthatthebooksshoudbebanished.Asthebooksgo,moreandmorepeopledon'tlikereadit.Theythinkusecomputershouldmoreconvenientthanreadingbooks.

Formypart,Iholdthepointofviewthatbooksshouldn'tbebanished,becausebookscanhelpusbecomeamanofconsidenableculture.Thosemindscan'tbeinsteadofcomputer.

Secondly,booksaretraditionalculture.Thereaerhavesomecultureputdowninwriting.

Allinall,notonlyareweliveinamodernlife,butalsotherearemanythingsconvenientthanthepast.Westillremreberthetraditionalculture