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高人帮我看看,这篇英语写的可以吗?帮我修改一下谢谢了Wishyouhaveahappynewyearofthedragon.foryearofthedragonthatisworthrememberinginthepastyearlifeisbetterandbetter,whetheritisloveorlearning,Iwil
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高人帮我看看,这篇英语写的可以吗?帮我修改一下谢谢了
Wishyouhaveahappynewyearofthedragon.foryearofthedragonthatisworthremembering
inthepastyearlifeisbetterandbetter,whetheritisloveorlearning,Iwillbeveryhardmakeitbetter
Experiencedalotofthingsafterhighschool,Allthepast,becomememorynow.
Oftenthinkiandmygoalisstillfaraway
It’sjustlikedriving.Whenyou’redrivinginacar,itcanbehardtosee
whereyouareandwhereyou’reheadingto.Ontheotherhand,pausingfora
shortmomenttolookatthemapcanbeamazinglyhelpful.Whereareyouright
now?Howfarhaveyoutraveled?Wheredoyouwanttogoto?
Myfriendsaremybiggestaccomplishmentsthisyear.
Loveismygreatesthappinessthisyear.
ThenewyearIwillbeveryhardmakeitbetter.
(MyEnglishispoor,sosorry)
曲毅回答：
先不说句子意思了,我也没有太仔细的推敲,只是指出些明显的语法或表达问题吧：1、foryearofthedragonthatisworthrememberinginthepastyearlifeisbetterandbetter（这句话不知所云）,whetheritis...
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