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【高考英语作文评分看这篇作文能得多少分满分25分请指出语法错误AhFuandmysisterAhFuisadog.Asforit'sadog.Weallproudofit.Oneday,thewholefamilywenttoworkonthefield.TakemysisterandAhFualone.】
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高考英语作文评分看这篇作文能得多少分满分25分请指出语法错误
AhFuandmysister
AhFuisadog.Asforit'sadog.Weallproudofit.
Oneday,thewholefamilywenttoworkonthefield.TakemysisterandAhFualone.TheparentswereworkingwhenmysisterplayingbytheriverwithAhFu.Whenshewasjustabouttopickaflower.Shefellintotheriver.AhFusawthese.Itwasbarkingthenjumpedintotheriver.MyparentsheardAhFu'sbark.Runintotheriveratonce.Bythistime.AhFuwasswimmingtomysisterandtakinghertothebank.MyparentswassopleasedandpraisedAhFuwarmly.
Becauseofthis.WeallproudofAhFu.
指出错误
穆世功回答：
挺不错的.至少能拿个20分以上,要我打可能23左右.基本意思表达很好,语法和单词也不错,但是就是有些用法稍微有点感觉怪怪的.（别嫌我啊）就这两句“Despitethediscouragement,Itriedtogetmother'ssupportness...
彭寒梅回答：
结尾怎么写不会
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