问题标题：
请帮我看看这段话哪里有错误并且帮我改正一下IfIcanchoosetohowtodie,Iwanttoimitateofhim,thenIcanknowwholovesme,whoreallycareaboutme.ButIcan'tseetheseSo,IamnotpleasednowIfmynamewillappearonthebai
问题描述：
请帮我看看这段话哪里有错误并且帮我改正一下
IfIcanchoosetohowtodie,Iwanttoimitateofhim,thenIcanknowwholovesme,whoreallycareaboutme.
ButIcan'tseethese
So,
Iamnotpleasednow
Ifmynamewillappearonthebaiduencyclopediainthefuture
Itrecordedthestoryaboutmylifeaftermydeath,
but,
Icannotcontinuetousebaidu.
常浩浩回答：
1.choose后的to去掉,2.care改为cares,3.willappear去掉will,4.recorded改为willrecord
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