问题标题：
帮我修改一下英语作文,有问题语病的地方请指出来,Iwasreallysadtheredays.Ihaveproblemsandtheyareserious.Ineedyourhelp.MybestfriendleavedforShanghaitwodaysago.Ialwaysmissedher.IwanttocallherupburIdid
问题描述：
帮我修改一下英语作文,有问题语病的地方请指出来,
Iwasreallysadtheredays.Ihaveproblemsandtheyareserious.Ineedyourhelp.
MybestfriendleavedforShanghaitwodaysago.Ialwaysmissedher.IwanttocallherupburIdidnothertelephonenumber.SoIcannotliaisonwithher.WhatshouldIdo?
Thenwetalkaboutanotherproblem.Inmybirthday.MyfatherbuysanexpensiveSwisswatchforme.ButIdonotknowthatwheremywatchis.Ilookforeverywhere.Ilostmywatch.Iwasreallysad.Icannotvisualizeifmyfatherknowit.Itwasterrible!Oh,whatshouldIdo?Canyouhelpme?
一个有关于自己的问题的作文,哪里有语病或者不恰当的地方请给予修改,
第三行第一个单词不是BUR是BUT,后面是didnotkonw.
汤仁良回答：
第三行not后面少了know;第四行wetalk最好说成Letus;倒数第三行Idonotknow后面不用加that;lookfor后面缺少it；Icannotvisualizeifmyfatherknowit．中将visualize改成imagine.你的作文总的来说,让人...
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