问题标题：
【英语作文ChangsinmyhometownMyhometownischangingallthetime,andyou?Ihopeyoursisn’tit.Myhometownisverycleanin10yearagos.Myhometownisveryfilthyin3yearagos.Myhomeisfrontthe100-year-oldtree.Butnow,isn'tr】
问题描述：
英语作文Changsinmyhometown
Myhometownischangingallthetime,andyou?Ihopeyoursisn’tit.
Myhometownisverycleanin10yearagos.Myhometownisveryfilthyin3yearagos.Myhomeisfrontthe100-year-oldtree.Butnow,isn'treplyexistence.Allanimalsneedplentyofwater.Iusedtogoswimminginmyhometown’sriver.Butnow,wecan’tgoswimminginit.Becausetheriverdirtiedalready.It’sblack!
Soweshouldprotectenvironment.
找个老师帮我找出语法错误的地方，谢谢（最好直接改原文的）
刘晓芬回答：
全文太多的hometown,可以换别的词。
第一句，后面andyou不该用，不地道，后面Ihopeyoursisn'tit这句话你想表达什么意思，不好，去掉。
第二句is改为was过去式，总体改为Itwasveryclean10yearsago.
Andinfrontofmyhouse,therewasa100-yearoldtree.
However,itwasn'texistanymore.
theriverhasbeenverydirty.
在environment前加the
林金明回答：
Myhometownischangingallthetime,andyours?Ithinkyoursischanging,too.
Myhometownwasn'tveryclean10yearago.Myhometownwasveryfilthyin3yearago.Infrontofmyhousetherewere100-year-oldtrees.Butnow,isn'treplyexistence.Allanimalsneedplentyofwater.Iusedtogoswimminginmyhometown’sriver.Butnow,wecan’tgoswimminginit.Becausetheriverhasbeendirtiedalready.It’sblack!
Soweshouldprotecttheenvironment.
点击显示
其它推荐