麻烦修改一下以下文章（初中水平）AdayaboutChinesestudentPerhapssomepeoplewillbecuriousaboutChina'seducationbecauseitisdifferentfrommuchforeigneducation.Manystudentsalwaysgetupat7o’clock.Afterhavingbreakfa|小学英语问答-字典翻译问答网

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麻烦修改一下以下文章（初中水平）AdayaboutChinesestudentPerhapssomepeoplewillbecuriousaboutChina'seducationbecauseitisdifferentfrommuchforeigneducation.Manystudentsalwaysgetupat7o’clock.Afterhavingbreakfa

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麻烦修改一下以下文章（初中水平）

AdayaboutChinesestudent

PerhapssomepeoplewillbecuriousaboutChina'seducationbecauseitisdifferentfrommuchforeigneducation.

Manystudentsalwaysgetupat7o’clock.Afterhavingbreakfast,theywillgotoschool.Whentheycometoschool,theywillreadbookandhandtheirhomework.Afterthis,theywillhavearest.10minuteslater,thebellwillrang,theywillcomeintotheclassroomandlisteningtheteachercarefully.Attheendoftheclass,theteacherwilltellstudentsabouttheirhomework.StudentsinChinaalwayshavelotsofhomework.

Inmorning,studentswillhave4classes.SuchasChinese,Math,Englishsoon.Afterthistheywillgohomeandhavelunch.Afterlunch,theyhavesometimetorest.

Theywillhavetwoorthreeclassesinafternoon.Thentheywillgohome.Theywillhavedinnerandfinishtheirhomework.

ThisisadayaboutChinesestudent.

What’syouropinionaboutthis?

刘丽辉回答：

　　1.Adayabout改成Adayof,student改成students 　　2.itisdifferentfrommuch改成itismuchdifferentfrom 　　3.Whentheycometoschool把cometo改成arriveat更符合语境. 　　4.handtheirhomework,把hand改成handin,表传递上来的意思. 　　5.rang改成ring,rang是ring的过去式. 　　6.listening改成listento,和and前面的动词形式一样. 　　7.Inmorning中间加the. 　　8.Math改成maths,无须大写,后面加s 　　9.soon改成andsoon.固定词组. 　　10ThisisadayaboutChinesestudent.改成ThisisadayofChinesestudents.

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