【求助+有赏】求英语达人帮忙润色教师推荐信.

推荐信是我自己从中文翻译过去的,由于水平有限,肯定不少问题.我希望能改的能地道一些,更像老师的口吻.

DearAdmissionCommittee,

AsanassociateprofessorinCapitalNormalUniversityofChina,IhavehadthepleasureofknowingYangDanyuforoneyear.Athisrequest,Iammorethanhappytowritethisletterofrecommendation.

IfirstnoticedthisstudentwhensheappliedtomeforjoininginmyprogramgroupinUndergraduateScientificandTechnologicalInnovationProject.Accordingtotherecommendationfromthevice-prexy,Iagreetoaddherin.Asshewasafreshmanthen,Igavehersomebasictasksandletherfollowtheothergroupmembers.Afteraperiodofobservation,IhaveperceivedthatYangistalentedandresponsiblestudent.Shetakestheprogramreallyseriouslyandlearnsveryfast.Ineachgroupdiscussion,sheisoutstandingbecauseofherenthusiasmandenterprise.Sheiseagertolearnmoreandshethinkshard.Moreover,sheiscapabletogetalongwithothersverywellandworkwithotherspleasantly.Shefinishedeachtaskinearnestandhandedinthemintime.

字数超了,那我再摘重要一段：

Yangappliedherownprogramcalleddataminingfortheimprovementofcoursesystemastheleaderofthegroup.ThetitleoftheprogramwasproposedbyherselfandIamreallyinterestedinitasthereisfewstudyaboutit.Shecameupwiththeideathatassociatecourseinformationinthesearchengineonlinewiththecoursesystem.Thisideanotonlycanimprovingelectivesystem,alsoproposeanewwayofusingsearchengineapproachefficiently.