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英语改错高手们,求救!这个自己真是看不出来啊,TheColorPurplewrittenbyAliceWalkerportraysalesbianlovebetweentheheroineCelieandShug.ThelesbianlovebetweenCelieandShughasadecisiveinfluenceonCelie’sfinalind
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英语改错高手们,求救!这个自己真是看不出来啊,
TheColorPurplewrittenbyAliceWalkerportraysalesbianlovebetweentheheroineCelieandShug.ThelesbianlovebetweenCelieandShughasadecisiveinfluenceonCelie’sfinalindependence.Withthehelpofthelesbianlove,theheroineCelienotonlyleavestheman-centeredfamilyandgainsthefreedom,butalsowinstheindependenceonphysical,spiritualandeconomic.ItisvitalthattheheroineCeliewinsthedignityandconfidenceandfinallyusheredintheawakeningoftheself-worthwhicharouseformthedeepheartofCelie.ThefinalindependenceofCelieisfromthehelpandencouragementofShug.ThisessayisstartingfromthelesbianlovebetweenCelieandShug,andfocusingonthegreatinfluenceofthelesbianloveonCelie.
吕卓回答：
physical,spiritualandeconomic是adj.应该用physical,spiritualandeconomicindependence
ThisessayisstartingfromthelesbianlovebetweenCelieandShug,andfocusingonthegreatinfluenceofthelesbianloveonCelie.改为startedfrom或者startsfrom
其他的我就不知道了.那个下次尽量少用翻译软件很渣的.
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