请英语高手帮我点评一下我的这篇英语四级作文,不甚感激.

1：各大学开设了各种各样的选修课

2：学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课

3：以你自己为例.

Whatelectivestochoose?

Nowdifferentkindsofelectivesareopenedtothecollegestudentsinmanyuniversity.Theysaytheelectiveswillexpandthestudents'viewandenrichtheirlife.

Differentstudentshavedifferentchoice.Somestudentsselectaclassoftaijiquan.Theythinkthattaijiquanisourtraditionalcreamandithavemagicpowertoattracttheytochoose.Inaddition,learningtaijiquanwillmaketheirhealthbetter.Andotherstudentslikeaclassofenvironmentinourlife.Theyholdthatenvironmentinourworldisgettingmoreandmoreworseandweshouldlearnsomethingtoprotectit.Moreover,todaymanystoresarearoundtheirschoolalwaysusegreatmanyofplasticbagsandboxes.

Formypart,IlikethecultureofChaoshan,soIselectaclassofChaoju.Theteacherinourclassisveryinterestingandhumor.Hisclassisrelaxed.Importantly,IcanlearnsomethingaboutthedevelopmentofChaojuandaskillofplay.Insum,itisagoodchoiceforme.