【考研作文修改各种意见,虚心接受,Asissymbolicallyportrayedinthecartoon,aboilinghotpotembodiesdifferentkindsofculture,bothmodernandancient,Chineseandforeign,suchasKongfu,LaoShe,Einstein,PekingOperaandsoforth.Thecap】|小学作文问答-字典翻译问答网

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【考研作文修改各种意见,虚心接受,Asissymbolicallyportrayedinthecartoon,aboilinghotpotembodiesdifferentkindsofculture,bothmodernandancient,Chineseandforeign,suchasKongfu,LaoShe,Einstein,PekingOperaandsoforth.Thecap】

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考研作文修改

各种意见,虚心接受,

Asissymbolicallyportrayedinthecartoon,aboilinghotpotembodiesdifferentkindsofculture,

bothmodernandancient,Chineseandforeign,suchasKongfu,LaoShe,Einstein,PekingOperaandsoforth.Thecaptionindicates,”theculturehotpotisnotonlydeliciousbutalsonutritious”.

Undoubtedly,wecandeducefromthepicturethatthecartoonististryingtoattractourattentiontothediversityoftheculture.Therearenumerousbenefitsforourselves,andIwouldonlyexploreonlytwoofthemostimportantones.First,asfortheculturehotpotisdelicious,manyforeignculturearefreshtous,whichwecanchangeourtastetoafterbeingtiredofouroldfashioninabidtocreatenewpowertodothingsmoreenthusiastically.Second,thenutritionoftheculturehotpotisofgreatsignificancetoourgrowth.Onlywhenwehavethewellunderstandingofdifferentculturecanweconquerthegreatamoutdifficultieswhichwewilencounterwhenweworkwithforeigners.

Asacollegestudent,Ifirmlybelievethatweshouldtakeadvantageofthebenefitsresultingfromthediversityofculture.Itisbelievedthatabrightfuturewillawaitusifwecansparenoefforttopromotethediversityofthecuture.Onlyinthiswaycanourcountry,ourpeopleenjoyarevival.

李晓雪回答：

　　写得真好.比我当年考研时写得好多了. 　　有几个地方,谈不上修改,只是探讨一下. 　　1、manyforeignculturearefreshtous,whichwecanchangeourtastetoafterbeingtiredofouroldfashioninabidtocreatenewpowertodothingsmoreenthusiastically. 　　culture有两个含义：（1）thecustomsandbeliefs,art,wayoflifeandsocialrganizationofaparticularcountryorgroup.这个cultrue是不可数名词.（2）acountry,group,etc.withitsownbeliefs,etc.这个cultrue是可数名词. 　　贵文应当是第一种culture,所以没有用复数形式.但前面直接用many限制就不合适了.建议改成manykindsofforeignculture. 　　whichwecanchangeourtasteto强调的是“we”,但文中讲的是外国文化对我们的影响,强调的是“foreignculture”.所以改成whichcanchangeourtaste语意更顺些. 　　2、Onlywhenwehavethewellunderstandingofdifferentculturecanweconquerthegreatamoutdifficultieswhichwewilencounterwhenweworkwithforeigners. 　　well是副词,应改成good. 　　differentculture改成differentcultures.不可数名词表示种类,要用复数. 　　amout后面要加of. 　　3、Onlyinthiswaycanourcountry,ourpeopleenjoyarevival. 　　改成Onlyinthiswaycanourcountry,ourpeopleandourcultureitselfenjoyarevival.

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