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在帮我改篇考研小作文,姐姐,受累Directions:Supposeyouareacollegestudent,writeanemailtoapplyforastudentloan.DearSirorMadam,IamasophomorefromAdministrationDepartmentofouruniversity.Iamwritingtoapplyforastu
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在帮我改篇考研小作文,姐姐,受累
Directions:Supposeyouareacollegestudent,writeanemailtoapplyforastudentloan.
DearSirorMadam,
IamasophomorefromAdministrationDepartmentofouruniversity.Iamwritingtoapplyforastudentloanfromouruniversity.
Firstly,myfamilycannotaffordmytuition,becauseihavetwobrothersandsistersstudyinginmiddleschoolandmyparentssalarybarelycoverhouseholdexpenses.Therefore,Iwouldliketorelievemyfamilyburdenthroughapplyingforastudentloan.Inaddition,Ihavebeenworkinghardinmystudyallthewayandachievedoutstandingscores.So,Ithinkmyqualificationsmeetthestudentloanrole.
Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Thankyouforyourkindassistanceinthismatter.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
林言方回答：
DearSirorMadam,
IamasophomorefromAdministrationDepartmentofouruniversity.Iamwritingtoapplyforastudentloan.
Firstly,myfamilycannotaffordmytuition,becauseihavetwobrothersandonesisterstudyinginmiddleschoolandmyparents'salariesbarelycoverthehouseholdexpenses.Therefore,Iwouldliketolightenmyfamily'sfinancialburdenthroughapplyingforastudentloan.Inaddition,IhavebeenworkinghardinmystudyallthetimeandIhavegotoutstandingachievements.So,IthinkIamqualifiedtobeanapplicant.
Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Thankyouforyourkindassistanceinthismatter.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
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