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一篇简单的初一英语作文,进来看下有什么错误,January30thismymother’sbirthyday.notlongago,shehadherforty-secondbirthdaywithmyfamily.First,mysisterandmegavehersomegoodgifts——Igaveheraportraitofher,mys
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一篇简单的初一英语作文,进来看下有什么错误,
January30thismymother’sbirthyday.notlongago,shehadherforty-secondbirthdaywithmyfamily.
First,mysisterandmegavehersomegoodgifts——Igaveheraportraitofher,mysistergaveherabirthdaycard.Shelikedthemverymuch!
Theninnoon,myfamilyhadadeliciouslunchat“ChuanYufamily”restaurant,unclespentmoneyforlunch!Hesaidwithasmile:“happybirthdaytomysister!”
Last,inevening,myfathergaveherabunchofroses.Whatasurprisegift!Mymothersaid:“Ineverspentsuchahappyday.Thankyouverymuch!”
李红光回答：
第一句既然是notlongago,怎么能用isinnoon不对,应该是atnoon.spentmoneyfor不对,应该是spentmoneyon.inevening,不对,是intheevening.spentsuchahappyday不对,是haveneverhad.一定要给我,累呢...
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