Ihadagoodtimeonmyschooltrip. 　　lastweekend,wewentonaschooltrip.itwassunnyandwarmallday.wetookbusestotheWestHillParkwithourteachers.theparkwasverybeautiful.thereweremanypeoplethere.first,weflewkitesthere.itwasveryfun.then,weplayedgames.atnoon,wehadapicnicthereandhadsomedeliciousfoodanddranksomedrinks.afterlunch,wewenttothemountains.themountainswereverybeautiful.wetookmanyphotosonthemountains. 　　today,weweretiredbuthappy. 　　句子开头我没有大小写,你觉得可以呢可以自己改下哈.