字典翻译 问答 小学 作文 应该有一些语法错误,但自己看不出来.帮帮看一下.还有作文结构上有没有问题呢?题目是人才流失BRAINDRAINBraindrainisadelicatewithwhichthiscountryisconfronted.Ontheonehand,moreandmorecollegestudents
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应该有一些语法错误,但自己看不出来.帮帮看一下.还有作文结构上有没有问题呢?题目是人才流失BRAINDRAINBraindrainisadelicatewithwhichthiscountryisconfronted.Ontheonehand,moreandmorecollegestudents
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应该有一些语法错误,但自己看不出来.帮帮看一下.还有作文结构上有没有问题呢?

题目是人才流失BRAINDRAIN

Braindrainisadelicatewithwhichthiscountryisconfronted.Ontheonehand,moreandmorecollegestudentswhoareexcellentpreferchoosingtostudyabroad.However,afterseveralyears,thesestudentsdon’ttendtocomebacktohomeland.Ontheotherhand,somepeoplepreferspendingsuchmuchmoneytoworkabroadandgetadevelopedcountry’snationality.

Whatarethecausesofbraindrain?Foronething,thereisalittleofrespectforbraininthissociety.Andthehighereducationstudentsgetnofameandfortunewhichtheyshouldget.Foranother,supplyingabetteratmosphereofstudyingatabroad,braincangainmoreacademicachievements.Finally,lackofmoneytoresearchworkinthiscountries,thebrainhavetostudyabroad.Forinstance,thereisalittlemoneyforinstitutesinthiscountries.

Tosumup,firstly,weshouldgivemorerespectforbrain.Secondly,thisgovernmenthadbettertosupplyabetteratmosphereofstudyingforbrain.Consequently,I’mconfindentthatabrightfutureforthedevelopmentofthisbraininthiscountries.

崔翔回答：
　　还可以吗.没多大问题.
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