问题标题：
【请问这篇英语作文有语法错误之类的吗?MyfavouritesportMyfavouritesportisswimming.ButIcan'tswim.Igoswimminginsummer.Igoswimmingonceaweekinsummer.Igoswimmingwithmyfriend,Coco.Sheisgoodatswim.Iwillwordhardi】
问题描述：
请问这篇英语作文有语法错误之类的吗?
Myfavouritesport
Myfavouritesportisswimming.ButIcan'tswim.Igoswimminginsummer.Igoswimmingonceaweekinsummer.Igoswimmingwithmyfriend,Coco.Sheisgoodatswim.Iwillwordhardinswim.Iwillbethebest.Lastmonth,myparentsandIweregoswimming.Weweretakethebustotheswimmingpool.Wewerehappy.
彭长根回答：
错误比较多
下面是改正过的
Myfavouritesport
MyfavouritesportisswimmingeventhoughIcan'tswim.Igoforswimminginsummer.Igoforswimmingonceaweekinsummer.Igoforswimmingwithfriend,Coco.Sheisgoodatswimming.Iwillworkhardtolearntoswim.Iwillbecomethebestinit.Lastmonth,myparentsandIwentforswimming.Wetookthebustotheswimmingpool.Wewerehappy
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