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加入你是玉林高中高一（1）班的学生李华,你的好朋友上了另一所高中,请给王平写一封信,具体内容如下：1介绍新学校的情况：校园美丽,很多树木；老师工作很努力,同学对人友善,2怀念过去：想念王平以及过去的美好时光；与他相处好,患难与共.3个人观点：友谊重要,希望互相保持联系.100词左右,参考词汇：seniormiddleschool保持联系：keepintouch

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DearWangPing,

Howareyoudoing?I'mnowstudyinginYulinseniormiddleschool.IwassosurprisedthanIcamehere.Icouldseebeautifulflowersandtalltreeseverywhere.

ThisisthemostbeautifulschoolIhavebeen.Andtheteachersarehard-working.IlovemyclassmatesbecausetheyaresofriendlythanItreatthemasmyfimilies,theyhelpmealot.

However,Istillrememberthedayswhichwestudyedandplayedtogether.Imissyouverymuch.Yougotwellwithmeandsharedhappinessandsorrowwithme.I'mthankstoyou.

Ithinkafriendshipisimportant.Westillarefriendsinfuture.Pleasekeepintouch.

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