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英文作文求检查MyfamilyalwayscelebratesontheSpringFestival,becauseonthisdayallmembersofthefamilywillhavethetime.Thecelebrationwasalitterbored,becausewehavedifferentpreferencesandage,soitwasmoredifficulttocommu
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英文作文求检查
MyfamilyalwayscelebratesontheSpringFestival,becauseonthisdayallmembersofthefamilywillhavethetime.
Thecelebrationwasalitterbored,becausewehavedifferentpreferencesandage,soitwasmoredifficulttocommunicatewithyourelder.Mygrandparentshadboughtsomecandyanddriedfruitsandhadputitontheplatebeforewecame.Whenyouarrived,youcouldwatchTVoreatingsnacks.
At8:00pm,begantelevisionprogram.Atthismoment,wehadbeenwatchingTVuntilnextdayearlyinthemorning.Duringthistime,youcouldn’tsleep,thisisChina’stradition.Whenwastwelveo’clock,everyonegavenewyear’sgreetingstohiselder.MycousinsandIshotofffirecrackersafterwards.Thenwehadbeeneatingdumplings.
有一些连接的词语不知道用的得不得当,还有一些动词的时态什么的,求整体看看怎么样,还有没有可以改善的地方!
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以下是我对您的作文的修改,仅供参考：
MyfamilyalwaysholdscelebrationsontheSpringFestival,foronthisday
allmembersofthefamilyarefree.
However,thecelebrationsarealitterbored.Sincetheoldandtheyoung
havedifferentpreferences,soitisdifficulttocommunicatewithoneanother.
Mygrandparentsusuallybuysomecandiesanddriedfruitsandputthemon
theplatesbeforewevisitthem.Whenwearriveattheirhome,wecanwatchTV
oreatsnacks.At8:00pm,theSpringFestivalGalaontheTVbegins.Then
wewatchtheTVprogramuntilearlynextdayinthemorning.Duringall
thistime,wecan’tfallasleep,althoughwesometimesfeelverysleepy.Thisis
theChinesetradition.Whentheclockstrikes12midnight,everyoneshould
sayNewYear’sgreetingstotheelderly.AfterwardsmycousinsandIset
offsomefirecrackers.Thenwealleatdumplings.
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