问题标题：
初一英语作文求纠错MywinterholidayIwasveryhappyduringthewinterholiday.TheSpringFestivalisonJanuary31st.MyparentsandIwerevisitmygrandparents.Iwasveryexciting.Iatefamilyreuniondinnerwithmygrandparents.Afterdinne
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初一英语作文求纠错
Mywinterholiday
Iwasveryhappyduringthewinterholiday.TheSpringFestivalisonJanuary31st.MyparentsandIwerevisitmygrandparents.Iwasveryexciting.Iatefamilyreuniondinnerwithmygrandparents.Afterdinner,wewatchedTVonthesofa.WewatchedTVuntil12o’clock.
IwenttocinemaonFebruary5th.WewatchedafilmnamedFrozen.Itwasveryinteresting.WewenthikingonFebruary10th.Itwassnow.Ilikedsnow.Itiscoldbutbeautiful.
Ilikemywinterholiday.
整篇文章都是过去式,但是语法不熟所以求纠错,
陈雁秋回答：
加了括号说明的都是要改的：MywinterholidayIwasveryhappyduringthewinterholiday.TheSpringFestivalisonJanuary31st.MyparentsandI(这里不能加were)visitedmygrandparents.Iwasveryexciti...
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