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Havingstayedincampusforyears,somestudentsstarttothinkingaboutwhattheycandoaftergraduate.
Forinstance,apartofthemurgenttoworkaftergraduate.perhapstheylookforwardtoanewlife,obviouslytheyarecuriousaboutthis,andtheyevenalreadyboringwithstudyingatschoolalsosomeofthemwanttoearnmoneyassoonaspossible.
Meanwhile,theotherpartofthemplanningontakingpartintheentranceexamsforpostgraduateschool.theyhopetostayincampuscontinue.probablythesocietyoutsideschoolperilousforthemandafraidoffindingajob.sincetheychoosetogetahigherdegreeatschool.
Inmyopinion,Itendtogetahigherdegreeabroadaftergraduate.Becauseabachelor`sdegreecanhardlyqualifystudentsforacompetitiveposition,andgoabroadcouldexercisemealsoIknowmychoicewillmeanacommitmentoftimeandmoney,butitwouldsurelyleadtoaprosperousfuture.