问题标题：
请帮我看一下,这篇英语作文有么有错误SnowNaturealwaysgivespeopleapresentassnoweverywinter.Snowiswhite.It'sverybeautiful.It'salwayscoverseverythingonlandlikedressingupinwhiteclothes.Soilovesnowverymuch.I
问题描述：
请帮我看一下,这篇英语作文有么有错误
Snow
Naturealwaysgivespeopleapresentassnoweverywinter.Snowiswhite.It'sverybeautiful.It'salwayscoverseverythingonlandlikedressingupinwhiteclothes.Soilovesnowverymuch.Inwinter,icanhavefunwithsnow.Icanmakesnowmenwithmyparents,goskiingandplaysnowballgameswithmyfriends.Therewillbecoldbutistilllikedothem.Ilovewinterbecauseofthesnow.Ilovesnowbecauseofitsbeauty!
第二行第三个词是It不是It's,我打错了
李淑清回答：
没有特别的错误,只是同句型的句子太多.
在汉语上可能叫做排比,但用在英语上不免有些牵强.
那个所有表达我的“I”都要大写哦..
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