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2025-01-26
My father I have father,he's tall and strong,he'svery kind. he like Saturday and Sunday,he often piay ping-pong,watch TV and read boks. he like poer、tofu、cabbage and fish. I like my father!名师点评:
I am so happy!Because you can write a good English composition. From it I know you have a wonderful father.You must love him very much. But there are some spelling mistakes in your composition.It does not matter.You are the best.I hope I can score your English composition any more. 老师很高兴你能上传英语作文。从文中老师能体会到你有一个非常慈爱的父亲。你一定很爱很爱他。但美中不足的是文中有些许英文的拼读错误,没关系的,你是最优秀的。老师真心希望以后你能上传更多优秀的作文,加油!继续努力哦! (快乐学堂特聘教师:邹老师) 2008-11-7 9:17:10
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