对比说明:帮助有前科的人开始新生活-Help Ex-cons①Start New.
帮助有前科的人开始新生活
【内容提示】
对于犯错误的人或以前服过刑的罪犯应该采取什么态度呢?是排斥还是帮助?有的人可能采取前一种态度,有的人则会采用后一种态度。试想,这两种态度会带来什么结果呢?显然会出现两种结果。请结合你平时经历过的一些事情对比说明上述两种情况。
【作文示范】
Hlp x-cons①Start Nw Lif
I onc rad a story about a prson who was put into prison for his bad bhavior. Aftr srving his tim in prison, h rturnd hom.“How can you hav th fac to com hom, go away!”his angry fathr shoutd at him. Two months latr, h was put into prison again for staling.
I also rad a story about a diffrnt prson in th sam situation, but whn h rturnd to his villag, no on lookd down upon him, and popl hlpd him find a job to mak a living. Fiv yars latr, h bcam a millionair②and contributd to th building of a school in his homtown.
Diffrnt attituds produc diffrnt rsults.
Gnrally spaking, aftr rducation③ most popl hav larnt thir lssons and find a lgal④ way to support thmslvs through honst labour. Whn rturning to socity, only a fw rturnd to thir old ways. But vn though th numbr of th x-flons⑤ who rturn to a lif of crim is blow 8 pr cnt, w should undrstand that ths rpatd offncs ar much wors than firstoffncs.
Th task of guiding ths popl is a job that blongs not only to th prsons thmslvs and thir familis, but is a task th whol socity should confront⑥.
(选自1999年1月27日《英文21世纪报》)
【词语解释】
①x-con[ks 'k&n] n.以前的罪犯;有前科者
②millionair[?milj+'n#+] n.百万富翁
③rducation['ri:dju(:)'kiM+n] n.再教育
④lgal['li:g+l] adj.法律(上)的
⑤x-flon[ks-'fl+n] n.重罪人,重罪犯
⑥ confront[k+n'fr)nt] v.(使)面对,(使)面临
【写法指要】
本文是一篇对比型说明文,即对照两个人或事物的不同点。文章采用综合法(all-about pattrn)开门见山地对所讨论的问题作了对比:第一段写对有前科者的不正确态度;第二段写对这类人员的正确态度,经纬分明。第三、四段是作者做出的总结和结论。第五段写作者的建议。