感激之情:寄语挚友-To My Bosom Friend
寄语挚友
【内容提示】
你的一位挚友对你的学习帮助很大,但他准备出国学习了。于是,你要写一篇充满感激之情的文章来叙旧,怀念你们相处的日子,回忆你的朋友在英语学习方面对你的帮助和鼓励,回忆你们在一起学习的情景。同时,你也勉励他或她在国外好好学习,将来报效祖国。
【作文示范】
To My Bosom Frind
I was sad whn you told m that you would go abroad. I'm going to los a bosom frind①.
Whn popl say that I spak nglish fluntly, I know, I ow th prais to you.
Do you rmmbr that nglish class, whn w wr larning th txt Th Ncklac? Th tachr askd m to act Mathild and you to act Jann. I was so nrvous that my voic trmbld, but you spok so naturally and nicly. How I admird you! Aftr class, you said to m:“Don't b afraid, and don't b shy. If you lik nglish you must opn your mouth.”I was dply touchd by ths words.
Sinc thn w spok nglish whnvr w mt ach othr trying our bst to xprss ourslvs in nglish.
I'll nvr forgt th Sunday whn w saw th Amrican film Turning Point. Though th actors and th actrsss spok vry fast and I coudn't catch vry word of th story, I got th main ida. Thn w talkd about th film for almost th whol day. It was, morovr, my turning point. From thn on, I bgan to watch nglish on Sunday, to listn to Radio Bijing and bgan to pay mor attntion to nglish programs. W ar both fond of Amrican pop songs②. Somtims w go to th movis, somtims w go to th nglish Cornr at th Popl's Park to practis our oral nglish.
Now, you ar laving m, but I'll nvr forgt th happy days w hav spnt togthr. I'll nvr forgt you. I hop you won't forgt m and othr classmats of yours. Abov all, I hop you won't forgt our mothrland whr you wr born, and hav bn living. I hop you will study and work hard to achiv grat achivmnts and thn to rndr ③ srvic to rpay ④ our country.
【词语解释】
①bosom ['buz+m] frind 知心朋友
②pop song 流行歌曲
③rndr ['rnd+] v.给予;提供
④rpay [ri:'pi] v. 偿还;报答
【写法指要】
本文作者满怀感激之情表达了对与知心朋友相处时的快乐日子的怀念。文章选材很巧妙,只选择了课后挚友鼓励自己开口讲英语和周日看美国电影《转折》之后自己在听说方面的转折两个情节。但是,读者读来倍感情深意切。同时,文中有些地方用第二人称来写,更使人感到作者所抒发的感情的亲切。