我爱你——黄河！

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你的家乡在某条河流的附近。它浇灌着河域的良田，养育着沿河的儿女，人们称它为母亲河。它或者流水潺潺，或者汹涌澎湃；沿岸景色万千，甚是美丽。你早有游览该河、一览美景的愿望，但一直未能成行。恰好，某个星期天你们班要组织游览，这使你非常高兴。请你把游览的情况和你的心情写一篇文章。

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I Lov You——th Yllow Rivr

It＇s wll known that th Yllow Rivr is th scond longst rivr in China. Though my homtown is clos to hr, yt I had no chanc to njoy myslf at hr bautiful scnry. What a pity！To my grat joy w wr told that w would go thr and hav a good look at th lovly rivr on Sunday.

It took us quit a fw hours＇ rid to rach th bank of th rivr,whr w saw th Chunü Spring①. It is on of th most famous hot springs thr . Th watr of th spring is so clar that w couldn＇t hlp diving into it. Our had tachr, togthr with us, swam happily. Floating on th watr, I lookd around . W wr surroundd by th grat mountains.

Thn w got on som small boats. W had bn longing to float on th Mothr Rivr. Sing hr powrful currnt and attractiv bauty, I flt proud of bing on of hr sons.

It was noon bfor w knw it. W wnt ashor② and thn dancd and sang happily on th grassland. W hlpd ourslvs to th tasty③ fish, crabs④ and othr food, which w cookd ourslvs.

It was tim for us to go hom. W had to say good-by to th Mothr Rivr. W all flt rluctant⑤ whn w lft hr.

（选自《英语画刊》高中版1997年第1期）

【词语解释】

①Chunü Spring处女泉

②go ashor [+＇M&:]上岸

③tasty [＇tisti] a．美味的；可口的

④crab [kr$b] n．蟹；蟹肉

⑤rluctant [ri＇l)kt+nt] a．不愿意的；留恋的

【写法指要】

本文作者把自己对黄河的一片爱心和感情融于对黄河美景的描写之中。第一段写自己急于游黄河的心情；第二段写黄河的景点之一“处女泉”及在其中畅游时的快活心情；第三段写乘船漂游时被美景吸引住的自豪感；第四段写上岸后吃美味时的高兴劲；最后一段写留连忘返的心情。