负疚之情:两支笛子-My Two Fluts由英语作文网整理收集 两支笛子

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假如你有某种爱好，想报考某一专业，比如音乐专业、美术专业、体育专业等。而这种爱好又不符合你父母的心愿。平时，他们怕影响你的学习，就把你爱好的东西藏起来或损坏了。你对他们很有意见，不想理他们。但过了一段时间，他们又给你把东西拿出来了或又给你买了更好的你爱好的东西，你反而觉得有些歉疚。请你就此写一篇文章。

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My Two Fluts

I hav two fluts①. On is complt and good; th othr brokn.vry tim I s thm, I can't hlp fling sorry and thinking of my dar fathr.

I lik playing th flut vry much. Although I'm busy with my studis, I try hard to find tim to play it. And I bliv I play it quit wll. At th last Nw Yar party I playd for my class, and vryon praisd my prformanc. I mad up my mind to bcom an xcllnt flut playr, so I told my fathr that I wantd to ntr Taishan Music and Danc Collg to larn playing th flut, but h wouldn't agr.

In th last final xaminations I got poor marks and my fathr was angry. Not only did h hit m, but h also brok my flut. H told m not to play th flut any mor.

A fw days latr I noticd my fathr was no longr angry with m. H smd to fl sorry for what h had don. Svral tims h wantd to hav a talk with m, but I walkd away, bcaus I had not forgivn him.

Th othr day a classmat of min told m that my fathr had com to th school to s m. As I was still angry with him and did not wish to s him. I askd th classmat to tll him that I was not in th classroom. A momnt latr my classmat rturnd with a bautiful flut in his hand and a smil on his fac. “How kind and considrat② your fathr is!” h said in an nvious③ ton.

“Ah, my dar fathr!”I said to myslf, whil tars bgan running down my fac.

（选自《英语画刊》高中版1997年第4期）

【词语解释】

①flut [flu:t] n．长笛；竹笛

②considrat [k n'sid rit] a．考虑周到的；体贴的

③nvious ['nvi s] a．妒忌的；羡慕的

【写法指要】

本文写父子各自都怀有的内疚心情：父亲把儿子的笛子弄坏了，觉得对不起儿子；儿子生父亲的气，不理父亲，觉得内疚。

文章第一段就把作者负疚的心理表达出来了，然后写事情的来龙去脉。第二段写作者的爱好和抱负；第三段写考试的失败和父亲的不满；第四段写父亲的内疚和作者的抵触情绪；第五段写父亲给儿子赔不是，儿子不理；第六段写作者负疚的心理。从第二段到第五段每段都写有矛盾冲突，这是这类文章的特点。最后一段作者没有向同学表白什么，只是流泪。但是一切均在不言中。这种写法耐人寻味。

负疚之情:两支笛子-My Two Fluts由英语作文网整理收集